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#1 User is offline   AaronAKAAtrus 

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Posted 11 September 2010 - 12:56 PM

Shorah. Welcome to the Cleft, the desert. Many others have begun here and many will continue to begin here. They have felt "called"- to D'ni, the civilization beneath our feet. The civilization my grandmother single-handedly destroyed, the civilization my father desperately tried to rebuild. The civilization I will now rebuild with by bare hands. Because I am Yeesha- and I am the Grower.
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Posted 26 January 2011 - 11:44 PM

I'm working on a story that opens with the following exchange:

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“My friend! You’re here in one piece – I take it Yeesha’s driving wasn’t too erratic?”

“Atrus!” I turned to him. “It’s good to see you. If you are a gracious host, you will let me wash the dust off before you even try to shake my hand, much less – ”

But before I could finish the sentence he had seized me in his quick, awkward embrace. “Dust indeed,” he said, stepping back and looking at me. “It’s a long road from the Duke’s settlement to here, and I think you’ve brought most of it into my house. I’ve built a bathing-room alongside the guest chamber, but I know you like the pools – will you join me and Yeesha there?”

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Posted 27 January 2011 - 02:03 AM

Re-write of almost all of Revelation pl0x. Well, at least the brother's dialog to the stranger.
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Posted 27 January 2011 - 03:58 AM

View Postaander91, on 27 January 2011 - 02:03 AM, said:

Re-write of almost all of Revelation pl0x. Well, at least the brother's dialog to the stranger.


I always imagined Sirrus saying, "Yes ... yes, I do remember you. I was a hair's breadth from freedom, and you trapped me on Spire. Twenty years alone, because of you. And you freed my father, as well? Ah. Well done. Let me shake you by the THROAT ... "
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Posted 27 January 2011 - 08:10 AM

View PostCactus Wren, on 26 January 2011 - 11:44 PM, said:

I'm working on a story that opens with the following exchange:

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“My friend! You’re here in one piece – I take it Yeesha’s driving wasn’t too erratic?”

“Atrus!” I turned to him. “It’s good to see you. If you are a gracious host, you will let me wash the dust off before you even try to shake my hand, much less – ”

But before I could finish the sentence he had seized me in his quick, awkward embrace. “Dust indeed,” he said, stepping back and looking at me. “It’s a long road from the Duke’s settlement to here, and I think you’ve brought most of it into my house. I’ve built a bathing-room alongside the guest chamber, but I know you like the pools – will you join me and Yeesha there?”


:rotflol:

Lets see if i can think up another one...
Intro to Riven
(Atrus links to Myst)
Hellooooo? My friend?
(Checks in cabin)
Hmm... AH! that's it!
(Goes down elevator)
(Loud rock music playing)
Uh.. what washis name again.. ARGON! no, thats not it...
Whoa whoa whoa! who's.. oh hi.
Uh, hello again, my friend....
Oh, what now?
I need your help...
Oh yeah, your girl is on the dissolving island ruled by your evil father who plays God blahblahblah...
Uh, yeah. So will you come?
*sigh* fine.
By the way, what was that devilish sound i heard?
Atrus, i'd think you'd like Peter Gabriel...
(No, i don't talk like that.)
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Posted 27 January 2011 - 09:10 AM

View PostCactus Wren, on 27 January 2011 - 03:58 AM, said:

View Postaander91, on 27 January 2011 - 02:03 AM, said:

Re-write of almost all of Revelation pl0x. Well, at least the brother's dialog to the stranger.


I always imagined Sirrus saying, "Yes ... yes, I do remember you. I was a hair's breadth from freedom, and you trapped me on Spire. Twenty years alone, because of you. And you freed my father, as well? Ah. Well done. Let me shake you by the THROAT ... "


YES PLEASE
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